What do you think about my "Ampelmann" ^^

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What do you think about my "Ampelmann" ^^

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Hi all,

I know it´s not that professional, but I like it somehow. It´s my 3rd animation. Comments (good AND bad) are very welcome.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=FUvUyGIu7Ms

And here´s my second one:

http://youtube.com/watch?v=hic05iEz6ZU
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The best from the first is the good timing of the camera usage. I like the flow with the music.
The second one is good also. My first one was done also with sticky characters.
Keep it on!
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Nicely done sir.
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Post by p6r »

2 sehr unterschiedliche Geschichten :
* Die Erste ist traurig aber so schön gemacht ! Ich hätte fast geweint... :wink:
* Die Zweite ist sehr lustig !

BRAVO !

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Post by Ricardo »

Very nice!!

I rate you 5 starts in youtube!!
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Post by ulrik »

Nice animations! I like them both, well done!
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THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!!!! I didn´t expect to get such good critics!!

...so this indicates that I should keep on experimenting.... ^^
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kaerf75 wrote:THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!!!! I didn´t expect to get such good critics!!

...so this indicates that I should keep on experimenting.... ^^
Absolutely! :D
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Post by VidE »

You've got a nice sense of flow and of story. It will be interesting to see how your pieces go as you develop your drawing/visual skills. Keep on trucking! And again, good work!
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Post by animationkolhapur »

Thats a very nice stuff ... liked the first one more ... good animation and overall presentation of the subject. :D
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Post by Nephilim »

Nice job on both! I really liked your drawings in the first one. Especially the street light and the waste paper basket. The second one was a bit plain, but the stick figure animation was done nicely. Again, great job!
~neph
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