Hello all! Here's my best so far!

[thatjoshguy]

Just wanted to say hello! I've been using Anime Studio Pro for a while now, and have lurked long enough, now it's time to show you what I can do!

Here's a little something I made recently that I consider my best work so far. I also have several early versions posted as well at my site. Please take a look and tell me what you think!


http://www.thatjoshguy.com/home/display ... m=13&pos=5

[slowtiger]

Wow! That clip has style! Very very nicely done, convincingly enough as cutout. Good poses. Personality right from the start (scratching himself).

Just some minor points: I really hate it when a title takes longer than the story. Yours is 40% of the whole video.

I think his head turns are too slow - a bit snappier would've been nice.

[thatjoshguy]

Just some minor points: I really hate it when a title takes longer than the story. Yours is 40% of the whole video.

I think his head turns are too slow - a bit snappier would've been nice.

You are correct. Those titles are sloooooooooooooooow. I should've animated more, or jsut done without. My OCD makes it hard not to fill up the timeline with something just to match the music, LOL.

I see what you mean about the head turns as well. Maybe i'll re-work it once more for good measure...

[ulrik]

I love it, the character, the art work and the story, great start!!
I agree about the too long (in time) title

[thatjoshguy]

hmm... If I clean it up, would Ulrik mind donating some of his beautiful accordion music? tee hee hee...

[slowtiger]

ulrik plays akkordeon? *perk*

[Barry Baker]

This is great! Bags of personality. Well done.

[Kadoogan]

I like it! Imaginative use of a simple character design. I love that kind of thing. Certainly some snappier animation in certain parts would help it along, and the titles are longer than necessary, but overall a very nice effort.