Mock Saturday Morning Commercial

Evitaerc · Post by **Evitaerc** » Tue Jul 08, 2008 4:17 pm

Hey all! Brand newbie here. Just started playing with Anime Studio a few weeks ago (LOVE it!). I'm currently competing for a contract with DC Comic's web imprint, Zuda! For fun I took my comic and created this "What if" commercial for it.

You can see it here.

Any comments, crits, tips, tricks would be appreciated! Thanks!

spoooze! · Post by **spoooze!** » Tue Jul 08, 2008 6:09 pm

Nice! The artwork and designs look really good.

I think the animation could be a bit snappier though. Some of it looks "floaty" if you get what I mean

Evitaerc · Post by **Evitaerc** » Wed Jul 09, 2008 3:37 am

Thanks spoooze!

Agreed, I get the "floaty" any thoughts on how to "snap" it up?

Phillysteak · Post by **Phillysteak** » Tue Sep 02, 2008 12:49 am

that was great josh. good animation of your illustrations or comics. the narration and voices could have been a little better but overall I thought it was cool.