new animation children's TV program (in the making)

mnagaha · Post by **mnagaha** » Sat Nov 08, 2008 2:28 am

animation for children's TV program http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VWwI2bwWeRU

please comment

still waiting for audio so i just put in the theme from "Nausica of the walley of the wind" to see

slowtiger · Post by **slowtiger** » Sat Nov 08, 2008 2:52 am

Quite nice. Maybe you should adjust your slow-ins and outs a bit, movement seems to start a bit too abruptly sometimes. Especially the dew drop in the beginning just starts to move as if it were a car - but in reality it only could move if the leaf gets tilted.

synthsin75 · Post by **synthsin75** » Sat Nov 08, 2008 11:46 am

(You're missing some letters at the first of that link)

Very nice looking. I like the blooming flowers.

The first letter of the name looks like a guy screaming.

Springymajig · Post by **Springymajig** » Sat Nov 08, 2008 6:55 pm

I really like all the background stuff, it's quite pretty, nice colours, moves ok (I agree with Slowtiger tho).

But I really don't like the fairy man... the design just doesn't look as appealing or professional as the background and the colour of his suit is really gawdy.

mnagaha · Post by **mnagaha** » Tue Nov 11, 2008 6:16 am

thank you all for commenting!

synthsin75
the first letter is "La" the full name is "lahiru madala" "the morning sun"

slowtiger
i know there is a problem with movement, but i cant really figure out how to address that... i think more studies of movement on simple figures is the thing to do. i'm making things up as i go along.

Springymajig
the color of the figure is a bit brilliant, if i have soft colors they will get flattened out when they go through our old transmitters.

thanks all for comenting !