Tastes Like Chicken
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Tastes Like Chicken
I made this run cycle, I thought I'd share it for your interest.
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funksmaname
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fantastic chucky!
Since its so good, I feel I can nitpick
IMHO:
I would have liked the tongue to be 'thrown' out of the mouth just as it opens... looking back it feels a little odd to me that the mouth opens and then a bit later the tongue shoots out like a frog...
only other thing i can see is that the tail (at the body end) 'snaps' at the loop, its the only thing i can see whose starting position doesnt loop semelessly...
Since its so good, I feel I can nitpick
IMHO:
I would have liked the tongue to be 'thrown' out of the mouth just as it opens... looking back it feels a little odd to me that the mouth opens and then a bit later the tongue shoots out like a frog...
only other thing i can see is that the tail (at the body end) 'snaps' at the loop, its the only thing i can see whose starting position doesnt loop semelessly...
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Víctor Paredes
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Thanks everyone, I am not worthy. 
In regards to the dust, its actually just the preset sparkle particle with a blur on it and a ground mask, using add compositing method, sorry to disappoint with that.
I agree with your critz funksmaname, I'm not sure why the tail has gone funny and the I think I rendered the wrong tongue, now you mention it, I had actually made a copy to test errors in swf renders and forgot to go back to the original. I shall look again at the colour and timing of the tongue, there are quite a few things bugging about the loop now I look again.
In regards to the dust, its actually just the preset sparkle particle with a blur on it and a ground mask, using add compositing method, sorry to disappoint with that.
I agree with your critz funksmaname, I'm not sure why the tail has gone funny and the I think I rendered the wrong tongue, now you mention it, I had actually made a copy to test errors in swf renders and forgot to go back to the original. I shall look again at the colour and timing of the tongue, there are quite a few things bugging about the loop now I look again.
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synthsin75
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Great work Chucky! Nice to see it with the rider. Very good interaction there, and tons of secondary motion.
Is it just me, or does the creature's neck stretch a bit too much? Maybe use a little arching when not fully extended? That may just be an exaggerated cartoon effect you were going for though.
Is it just me, or does the creature's neck stretch a bit too much? Maybe use a little arching when not fully extended? That may just be an exaggerated cartoon effect you were going for though.
