Caution ahead

Frigolo123 · Post by **Frigolo123** » Sun Feb 15, 2009 3:13 am

Bad time for my ducks.
A beginner exercise totally made with ASP
I discovered and I love this software.
Frigolo

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NsckKhBKhS8

Durand · Post by **Durand** » Sun Feb 15, 2009 3:54 am

Hey, I like your naturalistic style and motion. I also liked that Dragon (trailer?) Is that actually for a larger project? You appear to have a lot of previous animation experience. One small criticism though. There appear to be some 'popping' in the shadow layers when the pages flip open.

chucky · Post by **chucky** » Sun Feb 15, 2009 4:25 am

Very realistic look, canardly believe it.

You might also like to tweak the crashing duck's "take" when it sees that it is about to crash, especially the eye-line and the "breaking" action.
Look for some reference of that.

Frigolo123 · Post by **Frigolo123** » Sun Feb 15, 2009 5:19 am

Thank you very much, Durand and Chucky for comments and criticism. No, I don' t really have experience in animation, I made a short film 10 years ago with " Director "
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zQUH5SCfM6k
and my experience is due to exercises and tutorials with ASP, I really love it. But I did lots of painting and design. Thank you for criticism, but The Dragon is far from over, (I do not know how to solve this problem and I do not want to spend a month on each plan for the moment -global first-detail later!) -Work in progress-. But it is my project, the history is written, the storyboard is ready, it's just to work , know
Chucky thank you for the advice. I know there's a lot more work. But we did it for fun
Thank you
Frigolo