Shaving Cut? (HOW TO BE A MAN- Episode 2)

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Here's a brand new episode of Mr. Flowerpot's HOW TO BE A MAN!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISa_WFZpSjE

Check it out and please leave a comment!

[sbtamu]

LOL funny stuff

[lwaxana]

lol Awesome. I really like how Mr. Flowerpot gets bigger and Mr. McLippy gets smaller as Mr. Flowerpot chews him out. That visual representation of the relationship dynamic speaks volumes and it's timed perfectly with the action. Nice work! :D

[J. Baker]

HAHA, always funny and slightly strange.

[AmigaMan]

That's great Excellent writing, voice work and animation. I think the only thing that could be improved is the composition and framing at times. Remember the rule of thirds and also leaving 'talking room' in front of a character. Mr Flowerpot especially seems to be right in centre of frame or too far right at times. This is most noticeable when he produces the chainsaw as there is a lot of empty space behind him which feels awkward. I'm guessing you framed it that way to avoid having part of the other character in shot? Cheat and shift him out of the way for the Mr Flowerpot shot

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