Some test sceens from a short im making

[svante]

This is gonna be a 8 min short.
And heres a dummy of how it might look like.

http://vimeo.com/12498976

Feel free to comment.
Whats good? whats bad?

[Imago]

In the end, a piece of the sofa are stucked up on his.... Ehm... Gas exaust... Uhm!
Anyway, good character design and excellent backgrounds!
I liked so much pics on the travel book.

[ulrik]

I love the characters, the old man has a great sour look and on the contrary, the womans positive attitude, you can feel that there will be an interesting scene and dialog.
The room is also looking great, I guess you use a lot of textures?, however I noticed the paintings on the wall "float" they don't seem to be on the same plane as the wallpaper.

Well done, I'm looking forward for the sound and dialogue (in swedish?)

snyggt jobbat!

[AmigaMan]

A few obvious technical problems but it's only a test. I love the style and, even though there was no sound, I was kept interested and watched the whole clip easily. Already I can tell it's going to be a great short.

[svante]

Thx for the feedback.
im aware of the sofa just havent botherd fixing it yet. therse alot of timing that will be fixed upp for the final version.
And ofcourse the flotaing wallpapers.
In the final it will be shadows as well for more "dept feel"
And yes im swedish but the dialouge will be "international"
bla bla bla with a negative or positive tone so no real language.

tack så mycket!

[lwaxana]

The characters here are very endearing and I love the chalkboard part. Looking forward to seeing more. :D

[svante]

Thank you!
There will be more, but darn it takes time.
In 6 mounths i hope to have a final version.
This projekt got alitle to big.