Velaris Saga prologue

[BobsJobs]

I finished the prologue to a personal animation project I've been working on for several months. Hope you'll check it out and tell me what you think.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xtfq4De4VYQ

[Paul Mesken]

Looks pretty good. Great voices. Would add some more cuts and angles to keep interest going. I would go easy on the black outlines. They take away from the color shading. Making them thinner might be good or just give them a different color than black (long ago they used to ink with different colors, always looked great).

[fracturedray]

I liked it, I can see you put a lot of work into it.

There a few things that need to be tweaked but I wanted to offer a solution to the grass for when the woman is running toward the camera.

http://www.mediafire.com/?op47z0qbri2r2kx

Hopefully you can open version 7 pro. I'm not sure how to save as an older version or even if that's possible.

[fracturedray]

Working on that grass made me think there had to be a better way. So I worked on a star field.

viewtopic.php?t=17054


Then I changed the settings and got something that you will need to tweak (obviously), but useful for your grass.
http://www.mediafire.com/?1j42jbwp96c60aa

enjoy

[Durand]

Maybe this should be called Revenge Of The Silicone Queen. I might be mistaken, but was that that red devil woman called Brassiere?....No?