new cartoon

sinclair · Post by **sinclair** » Mon Oct 06, 2008 11:14 pm

Been working on the backgrounds and characters for a while now (still need to do some tweaks) All feedback is appreciated-

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XyHv5JiTScA

toonertime · Post by **toonertime** » Tue Oct 07, 2008 1:01 am

nice job... good characters!

bigjohnandcheese · Post by **bigjohnandcheese** » Tue Oct 07, 2008 1:03 am

Well, I'm a fan. A little like 2DTV over here in the uk. Nicely styleised and the gags worked well. The quality of art on your opening shot of the white house was beautifully detailed and got my attention right away. All round lovely work, you can be justly proud. I'll tell john to subscribe to your channel in the morning.

James (Cheese)

Some feedback on mine (characters in room, camera sweep test.) would be greatly apreciated.

shoepie · Post by **shoepie** » Tue Oct 07, 2008 7:50 pm

That's great, love the movement in the face, really makes the characters look alive.

sinclair · Post by **sinclair** » Wed Oct 08, 2008 10:12 pm

Hey Shoepie-

I just watched Man v2, anatomically hilarious-

Phillysteak · Post by **Phillysteak** » Wed Oct 15, 2008 8:32 pm

shoepie wrote:That's great, love the movement in the face, really makes the characters look alive.

I agree with shopie. I like it when a project doesn't have that; "Oh, they used ASP to do that.", "look", which you achieved. Really good man!

H.G. DaGr8One · Post by **H.G. DaGr8One** » Wed Oct 22, 2008 7:12 pm

Dude that was awesome. Short and freakin' sweet. How did you get so many hits? I got a beginner cartoon i thru together and it only got 150something views in a matter of a week. But know i'm getting nothing. How did you do it?

Here is a link to my cartoon if you wanna check it out,
http://www.atom.com/funny_videos/3EFBFF ... 700A04A81/

sinclair · Post by **sinclair** » Thu Oct 23, 2008 9:22 am

Again thanks for the replies-

I added a couple of head turns and expressions to the models, timing is still a little off but I think this is my best work with these two yet-

This one is called "billions"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r6n9LXjLmu0

H.G. DaGr8One · Post by **H.G. DaGr8One** » Sat Oct 25, 2008 12:52 am

sinclair wrote:Again thanks for the replies-

I added a couple of head turns and expressions to the models, timing is still a little off but I think this is my best work with these two yet-

This one is called "billions"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r6n9LXjLmu0

As artist why are we so critical of our work? WHY?! But people can't see what we see, right? It's all about the vision we have for the project. Keep up the good work. Who's gonna notice a little timing being off...except for you, naturally, and nit pickers. But hey, your work is online that is a big step.

sinclair · Post by **sinclair** » Sat Oct 25, 2008 9:46 pm

H.G.- You're absolutely right, but nothing feels better than when you set out to create something and nail it spot on-

This next one didn't exactly nail it, but came close-

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zXI9xuS5C00

PARKER · Post by **PARKER** » Sat Nov 01, 2008 4:06 pm

Its nice, i specially liked the face animation.
Well done.

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