I know it's not very good at all, but my focus is more on the writing side of things, and even though this one isn't much good at that either, I'm working on some new videos which I hope will be great. They will be released in May, June and October this year.
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NOTE: I'm more making this for my friends than for the world. It may have some in-jokes that people may not get, but I hope you like them anyway.
I like the story. :D The whole part about chickens cracked me up! And I like the voice-work. There's room for improvement in the art and animation, but the visual supports the story well, and IMO that's the most important thing. Nice work!
That was pretty good. I like the way you've thought about cuts and used closer shots and not just stuck with the same wide shot. A LOT better than my first animations that's for sure
I've gotta disagree about the voice acting. I think it's pretty strong. The different characters sound distinct from one another and they sound like they're actually interacting and reacting to each other. Plus, the story creates a lot of interest. Negative feedback can help us improve provided that specific critique and suggestions to improve the work are included. But it's hard to take a "this sucks" post seriously, especially when the poster is freshly registered. Just sayin'. :D
lwaxana wrote:I've gotta disagree about the voice acting. I think it's pretty strong. The different characters sound distinct from one another and they sound like they're actually interacting and reacting to each other. Plus, the story creates a lot of interest. Negative feedback can help us improve provided that specific critique and suggestions to improve the work are included. But it's hard to take a "this sucks" post seriously, especially when the poster is freshly registered. Just sayin'.
