Golden Ninja TIger Blade XVIII

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Danimal
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Golden Ninja TIger Blade XVIII

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What's that? You missed the first seventeen? Well, at least you can get caught up with this one:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AxdL4YD-yRw

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Post by smileypete »

good characters, perhaps there needs to be a point or a moral to the story, people need to feel like they've acomplished something by watching your work.

you have nearly three minutes of credits for a five and half minute clip. no more said there.
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Post by lwaxana »

Nice one! I like the animation where the kid is practicing his karate moves. It also looks like you took care with your storyboarding because all the camera changes work well, especially where the camera zooms out and he's surrounded. I also like the characters.

I agree that the credits are too long even with all the joke in there. Cutting less interesting parts (the unnecessary credits) will leave the viewer with a better overall impression.
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