I need your point of view on my work....

00moa00 · Post by **00moa00** » Thu Jun 02, 2005 2:02 pm

I'm actually working on an animation.
Please tell me what are you thinking of this snapshot.

be constructive

drdemoman · Post by **drdemoman** » Thu Jun 02, 2005 3:22 pm

well theres not a lot to go on there but it looks quite cool...yes i know its not a very constructive comment

it reminds me of a particular style that i cant pinpoint
some japanese influences there which i like.
quite plain and a bit boring

but i'm not sure what you are trying to achieve or what the animation is about so its a bit hard to comment.

2ner · Post by **2ner** » Thu Jun 02, 2005 3:42 pm

So this is a bamboo forest with snow on the ground? I thought bamboo forests were tropical. It looks cool though. There's a dream-like quality to it and I think it's a great background for an animation. What are the light patches on the dark side of the trunks?

jorgy · Post by **jorgy** » Thu Jun 02, 2005 3:47 pm

I like the look of it a lot - did you do it exclusively with moho, or did you use some post processing?

Anyway, it seems that the focus is on the branch in the middle, but it draws my eye down because I can't see the bottom of it. Is it attached to that piece of bamboo? Or is it coming out of the "snow" itself?

00moa00 · Post by **00moa00** » Fri Jun 03, 2005 8:55 am

jorgy wrote:I like the look of it a lot - did you do it exclusively with moho, or did you use some post processing?

Anyway, it seems that the focus is on the branch in the middle, but it draws my eye down because I can't see the bottom of it. Is it attached to that piece of bamboo? Or is it coming out of the "snow" itself?

I have pre-processing elements (i'have scan real ink paint and arrange on photoshop)
but the result its only moho 3D positionning and rigged elements.

I think i must go up the middle branch....

thank you all ...

mr. blaaa · Post by **mr. blaaa** » Sun Jul 31, 2005 3:19 am

Very nice!

I needed to a second and a third look at it before i recognized that there are several "clones" arranged in this composition!

Very smooth shapes and a fresh style of graphics.

Keep on, its really cool.

U may could improve the composition by using the golden ratio here and there a bit more impressive or decent as well as assymetry.
For example the two "arches" in the foreground are parallel to each other and reduce the view a bit. U could rotate and move them a bit so that they seem to be "grown" where u drop them.
Be a bit "constructive"!

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But all in all a good image!

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