XIN animation project-ep1

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[EHEBrandon]

This is good. The style has like a mixture of anime and toon.. Which is interesting actually. Overall looks good since its your own kind of style it seems. For the eyes I'm guessing you used a gradient? Also I can't help but ask did you use any form of bones or was it all mostly switch layers and point animation? Over all the walking animation could be tweaked up a bit. If you haven't tried this I would suggest drawing key frames on paper or on another software and trace over it in AS and do a lot of point animation with switch layers. So that way it gives it a more realistic feel to the movement.

[neeters_guy]

You’ve really nailed the fast cuts and camera pans that characterizes anime. That’s not to say you don’t have a lot of animation here, but you get a lot of mileage from the animation you have. Very effective.

[Little Yamori]

Definitely stepped up. The editing made it, nice scene and camera selection. Nice character work too, although some here and there appeared more tighter than others. The thing that was a bit distracting to me was the sun spots on the guys face in the first minute or so. It looked okay while he was lying down, but became a bit bothersome and a little ineffective when he was standing and talking.

Over all great work, nice sound and voice over too.

Keep it up.

LY

[lwaxana]

This is awesome!!

[Danimal]

Wow, very well done! The animation is great and well timed, and the voice acting actually contains real acting! Nice work!