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neeters_guy
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by neeters_guy » Wed Oct 21, 2009 8:38 am
Here is Turbo McSwine from my small press comic -- hey, neeters -- riffing the intro on Joe Satriani's Crowd Chant.
Turbo McSwine Plays Electric Guitar
Comments on the design or animation are welcome. Thanks!
This is was inspired by Acochran's guitar-playing dude:
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edit: Nov. 15, 2009 rearrange links.
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by grady1017 » Wed Oct 21, 2009 3:15 pm
I like the animation, and the design. And that character has the coolest name EVER!
Who? What?...Huh?
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by J. Baker » Wed Oct 21, 2009 5:29 pm
Rock On, nice work!
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by AmigaMan » Wed Oct 21, 2009 7:41 pm
Really nicely done. Some changes in expression would make it even better. Great design btw!
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by Mikdog » Wed Oct 21, 2009 7:43 pm
Very nice
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by neeters_guy » Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:35 am
AmigaMan wrote: Some changes in expression would make it even better.
That's been the feedback from my family too. This is a base character, so I'll start adding more switches, actions, etc. to extend his expression.
Thank you all for the kind words, especially from such talented folks as yourselves.
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by Acochran_89 » Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:03 am
LOL! That was awesome! Nice work
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by Imago » Thu Oct 22, 2009 10:12 am
Very good!
Sorry for my bad english... Q_Q
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by DarthFurby » Fri Oct 23, 2009 2:23 am
The character design(which I think is great, by the way) seems better suited for frame by frame style animation, not cutout style. But I also agree that a few changes in expression would help a lot, even a simple eyeblink or two.
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by neeters_guy » Sat Oct 24, 2009 4:22 am
DarthFurby wrote: ... seems better suited for frame by frame style animation, not cutout style. But I also agree that a few changes in expression would help a lot, even a simple eyeblink or two.
Will take this to heart. BTW, I really found your head turn vids incredibly helpful. Brilliant.
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by DarthFurby » Tue Oct 27, 2009 1:17 am
Hey thanks for watching the video! Your artwork is very good, you'll definitely be getting a lot of attention on these boards.
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by Bedhead » Tue Oct 27, 2009 3:58 am
Awww yeah. Well done! There are some nice suggestions for adding a little polish to this sequence, and I look forward to seeing how you apply that polish!
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by lumarama » Sun Nov 15, 2009 9:15 pm
Good character design. Good animation.
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by Joppa » Sun Nov 15, 2009 10:19 pm
realy nice! i like the way he play the guitarr.